At some point, I hope so! But don't hold your breath.
Personal circumstances have kinda put all my writing projects on the backburner for the time being. Once I'm able to get back into the swing of things (probably a few weeks from now), my newer, unreleased game will get priority.
I don't want to make any promises, but I have lots more ideas for this story that I hope to put to words at some point.
This has to be one of my top favorites text based games. I like pretty much every character and their scenes, especially Lancelil, Wurgle, and the racoon fellow... actually the doberman's scene was good too, there's just so many good scenes it's hard to choose a favorite. Very excited to see what you come up with next. Cheers, and good luck!
I probably should have included a "restart" button along with the save window, but there should still be a few simple ways to do go back to the beginning
Opening the game in a new browser tab/window should bring you back to the beginning (with any previous save data still hopefully intact in the save slots).
Clearing browser cookies should get rid of your save data if you just want to start fresh.
And the kinda brute-force option is just to get to a "Game Over", which prompts you to return to the title menu. Easiest way to do this is likely trying to cross the Brinebog without a guide.
I've kinda put this project on hold for the time being, and am working on another game (which is actually decently close to release, so keep an eye out).
Definitely intend to continue work on this in the future, as I have a lot of ideas still, but I do this for fun and don't want to just force myself to write if I'm not feeling up to it. So sadly I can't give you any real estimate on when the new update will come.
If I where to save at a point and then progress then try to load the save to go back on a decision I get this long error message that reads(copy and pasted):
" Sorry to interrupt, but this page's code has got itself in a mess.
SecurityError: Failed to read the 'localStorage' property from 'Window': Access is denied for this document. Error: Failed to read the 'localStorage' property from 'Window': Access is denied for this document. at https://v6p9d9t4.ssl.hwcdn.net/html/3242353/index.html:5463:6388 at Object.TwineScript_Run at Object.m at HTMLElement.<anonymous> at Function.each at Se.fn.init.each at Object.execute at Object.renderInto at t.data.clickEvent
Well, I'm very sorry to say that I also have no idea what that means, haha. I'm very much not a programmer and only have a tenuous grasp of Twine, honestly. HTML stuff is beyond me.
My best guess is that there's an issue with your browser (I've only tested on Chrome and Firefox), or that you're using incognito mode/private browsing (understandable for a game like this!).
I tried loading a save using Chrome Incognito, and got the same error you did. Weirdly, Firefox private browsing seemed to work fine.
If you're using Chrome/Firefox, not using incognito, and still getting this error, then I'm afraid idk what to tell you. I'm out of my depth. Hope you can make it work, though!
Thanks for trying, I don't use crome as its border line spy where but I'll download firefox and see if it is my browser that's causing HTML issues like this one for me
From what I have read there are two possibilities in my understanding. First, (less likely) you have cookies turned off which makes local data storage difficult. Second, (more likely) you browser is too clogged and you need to clear your cookies and history. This will reset some things and most importantly it will clear up any blockage, you should be able to easily find this in the settings menu for the appropriate browser or look up a how to. Otherwise you need an exper.
Reposting my review publicly for anyone who is checking this out:
Fantastic writing and design are all over this game. Not only does it utilize its format in clever and immersive ways, but the tone achieves a great balance of erotic and conventional writing that reads so effortlessly. If you're craving an M/M-focused CYOA that really captures the feeling of horny dungeoneering, you will like this one as much as I did!
Aw, I was having fun. Pretty neat world tho, and the writing's equally entertaining. The dialog is believable, conveys character, and isn't too wordy. The lewd scenes (at least the one with Lance) are well done. And there's just enough exposition to give flavor to the world without it feeling too overwhelming. The opening section before you enter the cave felt a bit drawn out tho.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm especially glad you enjoyed the dialogue, since that's an area I think I've been weak in and have been working to improve :)
And thanks for the critique about the intro. I wanted it to convey some of the protagonist's personality/background, but I'm not sure how much character dev you really need/want for what is essentially a self-insert character, and I especially don't want the beginning of the story to be tedious. May trim this section.
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This is a good game.
I recommend it
I like it and still wait for the update(even if I know there is few hope)
Thank you for great quest. I spent time with pleasure reading this story
Is there any hope for a continuation of the game? It's a pity if such a wonderful story will be abandoned. Maybe something can help?
This was great while it lasted, I do hope to maybe find this again updated
Hey, this being updated by any chance?
At some point, I hope so! But don't hold your breath.
Personal circumstances have kinda put all my writing projects on the backburner for the time being. Once I'm able to get back into the swing of things (probably a few weeks from now), my newer, unreleased game will get priority.
I don't want to make any promises, but I have lots more ideas for this story that I hope to put to words at some point.
oh that makes me curious ill be waiting and try for that 100%
gives off some real strong "city of ember" vibes, absolutely love it
Prettygoodgame.
Thankyou.
This has to be one of my top favorites text based games. I like pretty much every character and their scenes, especially Lancelil, Wurgle, and the racoon fellow... actually the doberman's scene was good too, there's just so many good scenes it's hard to choose a favorite. Very excited to see what you come up with next. Cheers, and good luck!
Is there a way for me to restart to the beginning cause I want to see some other choices?
I probably should have included a "restart" button along with the save window, but there should still be a few simple ways to do go back to the beginning
Opening the game in a new browser tab/window should bring you back to the beginning (with any previous save data still hopefully intact in the save slots).
Clearing browser cookies should get rid of your save data if you just want to start fresh.
And the kinda brute-force option is just to get to a "Game Over", which prompts you to return to the title menu. Easiest way to do this is likely trying to cross the Brinebog without a guide.
Hope this helps!
Thanks for these tips. I am relatively new to HTML games so I have little understanding of how things work on it.
This is definitely one of the most promising games I've played. Well written and really fun. Please keep writing. Love it
Fun game, very promising story - would love to see an update
FUCK dude wurgle is so hot, I need you to expand on his route and make him turn me into a full kinky submissive slave PLEAAASE
Great game!
no one knows :o
I've kinda put this project on hold for the time being, and am working on another game (which is actually decently close to release, so keep an eye out).
Definitely intend to continue work on this in the future, as I have a lot of ideas still, but I do this for fun and don't want to just force myself to write if I'm not feeling up to it. So sadly I can't give you any real estimate on when the new update will come.
No problem, and thanks for your interest! :)
What to do if it stats an error apon attempting a load?
Could you explain a bit more? Are you sure you had a game saved to that load slot?
I'm aware that attempting to load a save will prompt an error if you don't have anything saved there.
If I where to save at a point and then progress then try to load the save to go back on a decision I get this long error message that reads(copy and pasted):
"
Sorry to interrupt, but this page's code has got itself in a mess.
SecurityError: Failed to read the 'localStorage' property from 'Window': Access is denied for this document.
Error: Failed to read the 'localStorage' property from 'Window': Access is denied for this document.
at https://v6p9d9t4.ssl.hwcdn.net/html/3242353/index.html:5463:6388
at Object.TwineScript_Run
at Object.m
at HTMLElement.<anonymous>
at Function.each
at Se.fn.init.each
at Object.execute
at Object.renderInto
at t.data.clickEvent
"
I have no Idea what this means sorry
Well, I'm very sorry to say that I also have no idea what that means, haha. I'm very much not a programmer and only have a tenuous grasp of Twine, honestly. HTML stuff is beyond me.
My best guess is that there's an issue with your browser (I've only tested on Chrome and Firefox), or that you're using incognito mode/private browsing (understandable for a game like this!).
I tried loading a save using Chrome Incognito, and got the same error you did. Weirdly, Firefox private browsing seemed to work fine.
If you're using Chrome/Firefox, not using incognito, and still getting this error, then I'm afraid idk what to tell you. I'm out of my depth. Hope you can make it work, though!
Thanks for trying, I don't use crome as its border line spy where but I'll download firefox and see if it is my browser that's causing HTML issues like this one for me
From what I have read there are two possibilities in my understanding. First, (less likely) you have cookies turned off which makes local data storage difficult. Second, (more likely) you browser is too clogged and you need to clear your cookies and history. This will reset some things and most importantly it will clear up any blockage, you should be able to easily find this in the settings menu for the appropriate browser or look up a how to. Otherwise you need an exper.
Really enjoyed playing this! I look forward to seeing more content in the future!
Love all the interactions with Lancelil, hope he'll get more in the future.
Excuse the ignorance, but what is CYOA?
it stands for 'choose your own adventure'. its a story where you make choices at certain points which influence how the story will continue
Ah, thanks! :)
Reposting my review publicly for anyone who is checking this out:
<3
Really impressive game, can not wait to see more!
Keep up the good work comrade .
When will the next update come ?
Thank you comrade!
And I have no way to answer that, sorry. Hopefully not as long as this one took?
This is incredible!
this is Pog. will b looking forward to more of it!
keep at it, u doin good.
"Not written yet, sorry :("
Aw, I was having fun. Pretty neat world tho, and the writing's equally entertaining. The dialog is believable, conveys character, and isn't too wordy. The lewd scenes (at least the one with Lance) are well done. And there's just enough exposition to give flavor to the world without it feeling too overwhelming. The opening section before you enter the cave felt a bit drawn out tho.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm especially glad you enjoyed the dialogue, since that's an area I think I've been weak in and have been working to improve :)
And thanks for the critique about the intro. I wanted it to convey some of the protagonist's personality/background, but I'm not sure how much character dev you really need/want for what is essentially a self-insert character, and I especially don't want the beginning of the story to be tedious. May trim this section.
nice
thanks